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b.Revisieyle
Researchpapersusuallyainlyofinformationfoundinbooks，periodidothersourcesthatyoui.Therefore，aquestionyoushouldbearinmindis:Whatisthetoneor“voitheessay?Doesitfeelnatural?
Activity3-3:Usinganappropriatepointofview
parethefollowingtwostatements.Whiedoyouthinkismoreappropriateintheacademig?Why?
（1）InmyreseardthatthemativecriticismofJeffersonDavisplacesthefullweightoftheSoutheronhishead.
（2）ReseardicatesthatthemativecriticismofJeffersonDavisplacesthefullweightoftheSoutheronhishead.
Activity3-4:Usingunbiasedlanguage
&hefollowiainsawordwordsthatis（are）biased.Pleasefi.Discusswhytheselanguagesarebiasedandwhatyouakethemunbiased.
（1）Adoctorshouldalwayslookafterthebestiofhispatients.
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（2）Manisatool-buildinganimal.
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&isthaslearhosewho.
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（4）Agoodpoliowshisduty.
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3.Revisingwordsforadexaess
a.Revisingwordsforaccuracy
&writingisdtothepoint.Itusesavocabularyappropriatetothesubject.Ifyouknowyourtopicwell，youwillbeexawritingaboutit.Yourreaderswillklywhatyoumeanbecauseyouwilltellthemwithoutbeingvagueorfuzzy.You’llusetherightteicaltermsaailswhennecessary.
Activity3-5:Revisediforaccuracy
&hefollowingthstakeandseddraftsofastudeheinofIndiadifferencesdoyoufiwo?Andhowisthesedversioethaone?
&Version
&ionsofthefourmajorcasteswerespelledoutintheLawsofManu:TheBrahmi，theKshatriyascamethesed，theVaishyasfollowed，andtheSudraswereatthebottomofthepile.
TheSedVersion
&ionsofthefourmajorcasteswerespelledoutintheLawsofManu:TheBrahmieaterprettheVedas（holyscriptures），aherequiredritualsacrifices.TheKshatriyasweretobethewarriorsandsocialgovernors（evenkings）.TheVaishyasweretoteodtoengageinerordertocreatewealthforthetry.AsfortheSudras，theyweretobeetheservahreehighercastes-dwithoutmalient.
b.Revisingwordsforess
&hemosteffitristoedititforess.Youmayhavebeenstrugglingtothihroughasyouiledupalternativews.Oryoumayhavefalleofusihannecessaryjusttouseupspace.Ifyouletyinaldraft“”
awhile，youwillfinizeunnecessarywordsahemout.Yourreaderwillthankyou!
Activity3-6:Revisingdiforess
Thefollowiences（es）arewrittewordsphrases.Seewhatyouakethemmorecise.
（1）TheanthropologicalstudyoftheIers.
（2）Theratifioftheagreementbytheboardrequiresavoteofamajority.
（3）DuringthattimeperiodtheparkareaulatedwithIndianswhoweresulleninappearandmadealivingbywwithsilvermetal.
（4）Theproblemerisbyaerofbusinessandpolitics.Basicallythetwobeevirtuallyeilforallisaheyotbeaddressedseparatelyiyortry.
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